I like the ability to name Dragons and have named Dragons sent at our Kingdom. But can the name be included on the Throne page too.
We currently see:
A Sapphire Dragon ravages the lands!
Can it be changed to something like:
Philbert, the Saphire Dragon, is laying waste to your Lands.
Or;
A Sapphire Dragon, Philbert, ravages the lands!
RattleHead, your example is more of a statement directed at a third party (namely; Philbert) informing them of the presence of a Sapphire Dragon ravaging the lands. Rincewind's version seems more accurate, although the comma's may be superfluous.
I think my syntax is fine, you are mistaken on the interpretation. It is also an easier edit/adjustment overall, however trivial that may be.
By your interpretation, I am Arnie? Nay.Faces of (6:10) has begun a Emerald Dragon project, Arnie, against us!
Who is this Arnie, someone from your kingdom? :pFaces of (6:10) has begun a Emerald Dragon project, Arnie. Against us!
Honestly though I get what you're saying but I still like Philbert the Sapphire Dragon better.
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